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Forthold City - Completed- by PeekyChew Forthold City - Completed- by PeekyChew
Update: Well, it took a lot longer than I'd planned, but I've finally finished. After taking all of the suggestions for the area at the bottom right into consideration, I decided that due to the angle of the wall anything more than a simple path wouldn't be possible. To make up for that, I've redesigned the area around it, changing the gardens and walls of the main building thingy and making the samurai part at the bottom right into it's only little area. I've also changed a hundred other things as well. It took absolutely ages to get everything right.

Oh my god! It's a city now?! Well, as you can see, quite a lot has changed since it was a town ([link]). So much so that I thought I'd make it a new deviation and not another update.

Because I've been having loads of ideas for side quests in this area, it had to get bigger. It's almost double the size now, adding loads more room for new buildings. The two new buildings to the lower right are where the Samurai/Ninja (haven't quite decided yet) who defend the city from the viscous wild Pokémon will live. The very large building at the top is where the leader/head/I-can't-think-of-the-correct-name of the city will live. I haven't decided what the inside will be like yet. And finally, the empty area at the bottom right is, well, empty. I can't think of anything to put there, so suggestions are very welcome!

What do you think?

Credits: :iconpeekychew: :iconcnickc: :iconhydrargirium: :iconalucus: :iconkyle-dove:
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:iconaamelo:
Aamelo Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I wanted to know... where the houses public... or private?
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:iconpeekychew:
PeekyChew Featured By Owner May 30, 2013
Private, but I made them from this: [link]
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PizzaPotatoNBacon Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Student General Artist
This is too amazing. I have died and when to Pokemon Map Heaven. Suggestion for empty area: Some isolated old man/hermit who gives a TM?
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:iconpeekychew:
PeekyChew Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
Thank you. I've actually already filled in the empty area, but I do still want to add more to this map, so thanks for the suggestion!
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doomvader Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Student General Artist
I know this may seam random and all but i 'm currently try to be a dungeon master in dungeon and dragon so this is my first campaign and all that i currently building so... this town seams nice and i thought that this could be a fine place to start off my adventure do you mind?
post scryptum do not worry i wont profit of this or will i repost this picture elsewhere.
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:iconpeekychew:
PeekyChew Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
Sorry for not replying and I know it's probably too late, but yes, you can use this :)
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doomvader Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Student General Artist
you have my thanks.
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Raiyn7918 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Nice city, I like the way every thing looks, the roofs, andthe walls, im sure they'll confise a sleepy person; it look almost camoflage! i hope to see if they pokemon company might accept it as 6th generation, you know? I mean unless you choose to let them. ^^;
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:iconpeekychew:
PeekyChew Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
It took ages to get all of the walls to look nice together with the buildings and the roofs. While playing, it is actually quite intuitive and you really can't get lost. That would be amazing if they did! xD
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:iconclearfog:
ClearFog Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really like this map :)
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:iconpeekychew:
PeekyChew Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
Thanks! :)
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:iconclearfog:
ClearFog Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Np :)
are you all working on a game aswell?
a game looking to actually be completed? curious :P that'd be cool, but a loong process
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:iconpeekychew:
PeekyChew Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
Yes actually, all of the maps here [link] are a part of Pokémon XENOTIME, my fan game. This map is only in the design stage, and is yet to be put into the game, but the others are part of the beta which I released a couple months ago. You can play it if you like, but I've just recently completely revamped my code to remove lag and errors so it may be better to wait for the next version in a couple of weeks.
And yeah, it's a realllllly long process xD
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:iconclearfog:
ClearFog Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cool, good luck :)
it may take really long to perfect the game
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:iconpeekychew:
PeekyChew Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
Well, judging by the time it took to complete this, it's gonna take years xD
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:iconclearfog:
ClearFog Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes years haha
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:iconaamelo:
Aamelo Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This is simplistic genius...
Will you Marry Me? -Joking.
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:iconpeekychew:
PeekyChew Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
Thanks so much :)
Sorry, I'm not interested in long-distance relationships ;)
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:iconaamelo:
Aamelo Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Aw Man. I am going to pull a rope on me now... -Joking.
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:iconmidnitez-remix:
Midnitez-REMIX Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Finally done! :D
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:iconpeekychew:
PeekyChew Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
And it only took 11 months! xD
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:iconmidnitez-remix:
Midnitez-REMIX Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well it looks good. I'm just surprised it doesn't have a temple/shrine since it seems to have a big Asian theme.
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PeekyChew Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
Thanks! Err, yeah, my tiling skills only go so far xD
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:iconmidnitez-remix:
Midnitez-REMIX Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's fine, it's still good overall. :D

So what's the next map?
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:iconpeekychew:
PeekyChew Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
Thanks again! Maybe in the future I'll expand it again with a temple if I can manage, since I really like working on this city.

Well the next two maps are going to be routes. I need to make the northern section of this [link] , which is going to span around the back of this [link] in a really unique way I've never seen in another fan game before. After that I just need to complete the route which will connect this to the rest of the region.
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Midnitez-REMIX Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
And then all the maps will be complete for the game?
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:iconpeekychew:
PeekyChew Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
No, there's about double the maps I've already made again after that.
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Deorro Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
maybe you can fill the empty area with one/two statues of a acient pokemon.
I suggest Rayquaza or serebii, but if you have fakes in your game I suggest a legendary from your fakes
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:iconmosflow:
Mosflow Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i would suggest either a japanese garden or a samurai/ninja training ground. Heck you could do both if you saw fit.
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:iconpeekychew:
PeekyChew Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
Thank you for the suggestion. I was thinking of having that in the building to the side of it's grounds, since it's a dojo, but that may be a little small.
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:iconmosflow:
Mosflow Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
your very welcome. i'm happy to see that your project is coming along
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:iconpeekychew:
PeekyChew Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
Slowly but surely xD
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:iconmosflow:
Mosflow Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
...wins the race :)
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:iconkkkaito:
KKKaito Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
In the empty area I would like to see a kind of area for samurai's training.
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:iconpeekychew:
PeekyChew Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
Thanks for the suggestion!
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ToruKun1 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Japanese-y town surrounded by a big wall!? I LUVZ IT

(reminds me of Ecruteak City, tbh :love:)
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PeekyChew Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
Thank you =D
I did get some inspiration from that xD
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Demise-Hawk Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Maybe some plants or ground were you can plant things :) Btw the map looks great :)
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PeekyChew Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
Thanks for the suggestion. If it was a planting ground you could plant things for your Pokémon to eat. Once you gain access to them again of course xD
And thanks!
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TrueCynder Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i agree with Aamelo
some sort of harvesting ground
would suit tho :/
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PeekyChew Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
That seems to be the most popular suggestion right now. The problem is that there are rice fields just outside the city so I don't know whether they would need more food than that.
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TrueCynder Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol nah people only need rice anyway right ?
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:iconpeekychew:
PeekyChew Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
That and eggs and they'll be fine xD
Except there aren't eggs in the Pokémon world 0_o
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TrueCynder Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DAM DAM DAAAAAHHH
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:iconmidnitez-remix:
Midnitez-REMIX Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Maybe there could be some ruins of an old building that used to exist in that space?
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PeekyChew Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
Yeah, I was wanting to do a building. But there really isn't enough space without extending the walls and I don't know if it'd look ok not being square.
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Midnitez-REMIX Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Maybe a garden then?
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:iconpeekychew:
PeekyChew Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
Perhaps. I'm considering loads of things so I'll just have to see which looks best.
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:iconmidnitez-remix:
Midnitez-REMIX Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
okay. :D
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:iconaamelo:
Aamelo Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I suggest putting some kind of plantings/harvesting grounds.
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