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Commission - Poke Centre, Mart and Gym

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A commission made for Nineage, and only to be used by him. Watermarks added by request.

Commissions are still open and you can find out more info on my gallery :D

I had quite a bit of fun making this. It's been a while since I've done something so simple. What do you think?
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I think the execution on the buildings is well done. My only main critique is that they all look too similar. I think just something small, like a sign, or windows, on the Pokecenter would help. The mart is fine, I like the text on all of them, it looks simplistic and modern. The gym could also use something to set it apart, I like that they're similar in shape, they just need a little something to set them apart. Other than that, The shading itself seems good, though it would be nice to see some more highlights I suppose, from the implied light source. I like their modern look overall though Peekychew, nice work! Just gotta spice em up a bit <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>

Vision: Nice enough, you made some important buildings for a game.

Originality: Just needs some more variety.

Technique: Well done, though I'd prefer to see highlights, but to each his own.

Impact: They look like good usable tiles haha.

I understand it was a commission, so if the person who received them is happy with them, then great! Obviously feel free to utilize the feedback or not!